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Link Level Zero: a personal story of war, technology, magic, and romance (solver-orgz.codeberg.page)
submitted 2 weeks ago by tengkuizdihar@programming.dev to c/writing@beehaw.org
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It's fictional, of course. I hope you can give me a critique about my writing. The style, what's wrong with it, plot holes, sentences that doesn't make sense, the lot.

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