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submitted 1 year ago by redpanda@kbin.social to c/creative@beehaw.org

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I'm reviewing my manuscript and noticing that my scenes tend to trail off towards the end. This has been a long, arduous project and moving from scene to scene where the enthusiasm appeared was one way to keep on track with targets. Now I need to knit everything together into a cohesive whole. What tips to people have for rounding off scenes? How can I best make sure there is continuity between scenes/chapters/segments?

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[–] Revolving_Glass@beehaw.org 2 points 1 year ago (1 children)

And I just reread your comment for what sounds like: editing tips so scenes don’t go on too long. Make them shorter. An apparently misquote attributed to Mark Twain goes “if I had more time, I would have written a shorter letter.” Terrible ‘tip’ I know, but by finding what it is you’re trying to accomplish with a scene and then trimming all the excess it is like refining a jewel so it shines more brightly.

[–] redpanda@kbin.social 2 points 1 year ago

@Revolving_Glass thanks for the suggestion. I'll bear this in mind as I edit.