Your AC calculation is definitely wrong (11 + 1 + 1 + 0 = 14?), gold is not measured in dollars, "you are proficient in many things" is not useful, and your "out of battle" preview is almost entirely combat options.
It seems your idea of "reducing cognitive load" is to hide most of the character sheet but that's not helpful. Your DM asks you to make an athletics check; is it easier to use this sheet which doesn't seem to tell you your stats or a standard sheet which tells you the exact number to add to your roll?