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Poetry

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A community to celebrate published and OC works of poetry.


Welcome to !poetry


Guidelines & Community Rules

In addition to the general rules of lemmy.world:

Published Poetry

1a: Poetry posts should include the title and the author, when the author is known.

O.C. Poetry

2a: Sharing original poetry is encouraged, but it must be preceded by the tag "[OC]."

2b: If an [OC] post is requesting feedback, it should also follow with the "[FB]" tag. It would look like the following example:
[OC] [FB] Nothing Gold Can Stay

Feedback

All feedback should be given in good faith.

3a: All [FB] requests should be met with comments constructive in nature. It is okay to dislike parts of a poem, but make sure to explain why you feel that way.

3b: Feedback does not need to be extraordinary in nature. Simply expressing how a work makes you feel is often enough.

3c: Use the honor system. When you receive good feedback, return it in kind to another author. Everyone appreciates knowing their work is being read and appreciated.

As this community develops, these guidelines may be adjusted.


Formatting Help
Work in progress

To create a line break, use two spaces at the end of a line.

To create empty space, type  . Use four of these at the beginning of a line to create a standard indent.

UPDATE:
Some methods of access do not format markdown correctly. I am currently testing various apps and web interfaces to see what does and does not retain formatting.

In the interim, it is encouraged to post text poetry as you normally would, but to include a link at the beginning or end of the post with access to a website or image that retains the formatting as intended.


Other Poetry Communities
Poetry lovers unite! In the style of the fediverse, multiple poetry communities have arisen, and will continue to rise. I will try to keep a list here of communities across instances that are worth checking out!


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[–] Rai@lemmy.dbzer0.com 6 points 2 weeks ago (2 children)
[–] qarbone@lemmy.world 5 points 2 weeks ago (4 children)

Not in a confrontational way but can you (or anyone) break down why this is a good? I'm sure I have a shallow view of poetry but I'm not seeing anything in it that is technically impressive

[–] coronach@lemmy.sdf.org 1 points 4 hours ago

Coltrane once said of jazz: "if it sounds good it is good". It's okay if it doesn't speak to you. Maybe the responses here gave you a different perspective and you could appreciate it. If it still doesn't it's still okay 🙂

[–] Rai@lemmy.dbzer0.com 1 points 2 weeks ago (1 children)

O I am not a poetry gurl, I can not break things down, I’m so sorry! I just like the strange e.e. cummings structure and the ennui of it all.

[–] qarbone@lemmy.world 2 points 2 weeks ago

Yeah, I polled some friends and they said the same thing. They just vibed with it.

[–] TheSambassador@lemmy.world 1 points 2 weeks ago (1 children)

Poetry isn't just about being technical, it's about communicating a thought or feeling. I relate to the feeling of time slipping away, and this poem communicates that feeling in a very effective way such that I feel a connection to the writer. That's all.

[–] qarbone@lemmy.world 1 points 2 weeks ago

My understanding of poetry is that the level you're describing is for decent poems and then excellent ones are doing interesting things technically while being as emotionally engaging.

I'll admit I was likely reading too deeply into the comments but I thought people were considering this poem excellent when it's not at the level I described.

[–] funkless_eck@sh.itjust.works 1 points 2 weeks ago

Many great songs are simple and not technically impressive either, but still people like them.

[–] BonesOfTheMoon@lemmy.world 4 points 2 weeks ago

Great poem, I just started reading her first book.

[–] chonglibloodsport@lemmy.world 2 points 2 weeks ago

This feels like so many strings of thoughts I’ve had. Disjointed. Scattered. Words and images. Feelings. Slipping away.

I had no idea who Kyla was until I saw this post. I still don’t know, yet I know. She’s me. At least in this one respect.

I don’t even write this way normally. But I do think this way. Music.