Looks like you're on your way!
Two pieces of advice I'd give—it didn't look like you ever did the handbrake while you were doing the first stage. I'd def practice handbrake turns some more as they are vital to getting better times on stages with a lot of hairpins. (Jeux Verte is a great stage for practicing this.)
Also, you might switch to numeric pace notes asap. They're going to be numeric in the new WRC (if you use the standard ones) and K-right vs Care right is never very clear using the original RBR call system, so it helps with that as well as being a few more variants than what you get with mediem, sharp, k, hairpin, etc. Plus if you get a stage that hasn't had the pacenotes reworked for it by Luppis, it is easier to figure out the mental conversion in your head with numeric. (Eg, I am crashing and dying when I treat this like a normal 5, I need to subtract 2 from all the calls on this stage to make it through alive.)